by Alex D Dec 13, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Ive envisioned our love; youve enlightened my inspiration, |
Very great write! The flow was a little shaky in some parts, but the imagery and concept were brilliant! It's hard to keep a perfect flow in a poem written like this, but you've gotten very close. The word choice did wonders for this poem. Great write! 5/5 |