Defeated

by kylexthexmagnificent   Dec 14, 2007


Cant feel the wind brush my face,
lost in sorrow,
i feel my life is just a waste

so much hurt inside
darkness in my thoughts
too many times have i cried

cant feel the sunlight warm my skin
i cant take it anymore
the sadness grows from within

broken wings,i can no longer fly
i am the fallen hero
all i want is to die

cant feel the cold kiss my cheek
im giving up,
i accept my defeat

i cut my wrist
i bleed out all the pain
i cant belive it ended like this....

cant feel the essence of my soul
my heart stops beating
ive finally let go

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  • 16 years ago

    by WhiskeyGirl

    Beautiful poem.
    I really liked it.

    Sincerely, Sammie-Leigh.

  • 16 years ago

    by oNice

    Good job! I couldn't think of a better way of ending a poem like this than the way you did 5/5
    -oNice

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I think that any person who can make someone feel like this does not deserve your kinda love you offer her all your love and all she does is hurt you but if you love her like you say you do there is nothing i can do but i love this its great 100/100

  • 16 years ago

    by Always and Never

    I really enjoyed the way you wrote this. the rythm is really smooth. great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by K3LS3Y

    That wuz really good. i hope ur ok!!! :-)

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