That wuz really good. i hope ur ok!!! :-)

I really enjoyed the way you wrote this. the rythm is really smooth. great job 5/5

I think that any person who can make someone feel like this does not deserve your kinda love you offer her all your love and all she does is hurt you but if you love her like you say you do there is nothing i can do but i love this its great 100/100

Good job! I couldn't think of a better way of ending a poem like this than the way you did 5/5
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Beautiful poem.
I really liked it.

Sincerely, Sammie-Leigh.