A Bloody Suicide

by Chemically Corrupted   Dec 14, 2007


Blackened shadows
Broken dreams
Shattered spirits
Shaken minds
Lead to one thing
A bloody suicide
Blackened shadows
That needed light
Broken dreams
That needed hope
Shattered spirits
That needed love
Shaken minds
That needed a shield
Lead to one thing
A bloody suicide
A few corrections
And the world will live
There are too many mistakes
The world is doomed
To a bloody suicide

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  • 16 years ago

    by Irtine

    Line six, should blood be bloody?

    in the current society of young people, suicide, depression, ect are almost the style.

    i understand why and it's almost hard to get your head out of the woe and carry on. =)
    best of luck to you.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBR0K3NxX

    Ii LiiKED THiiS ONE. DONT LET THE FACT THAT PEOPLE CALL YOU WEiiRD GET TO YOU. ii THiiNK YOU WRiiTE BEAUTiiFUL POETRY. iiT MAY BE DiiFFERENT BUT THATS WHATS GREAT ABOUT iiT. KEEP iiT UP!

  • 16 years ago

    by xxlightedbydarknessxx

    Really like your poetry, and i luv your pic too, and i know the feeling of being called wierd, but you get used to it, but any way maybe you could check out some of my poetry sometime, i know you'll like it, later

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