Edit:
And its a verdant mound
That should be it's as in it is.

Besides that the only thing that bothers me is that allllllll of that has one period. It would be okay if it was correct, but it's not because I can spot areas where a period should go and a new sentence should begin. Same thing for commas.

I liked it a lot. It was beautiful. The metaphors I loved as well. This poem gets a five from me.

I liked this poem - it was extremely well written and the metaphors were amazing. I particularly enjoyed the emotion behind the poem, as the more emotion it is, the better the poems seem to flow. Very nice job, 5/5