Comments : Ticking time

  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Aspirations, aswell as a heart.. wow.. you are truly talented.. Starring = stars in, staring = gazing at.. sorry, I hope you sont mind.. I just want to be sure I read the meaning correctly. Well done. xx

  • 16 years ago

    by InvisibleHourglass

    I don't mind. I made that mistake twice so far in this poem. =)