by xPerfect Chaosx Dec 14, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Thump |
by she
Oh this is amazing!5/5 |
O3o Powerful. My heart started racing about the middle and the tension built. The thump, thump, thump... And then the harsh 'LIES' it makes for excellent buildup. *Catches breath* An excellent, well portrayed poem. |
by Ike Dizzle
You are right. It wasn't good at all...................................................................................................................................................................................................................It was great. haha Great job. 5/5 |