by Sharon Dec 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
If love was expensive and never cheap |
by Just Jo
I love this poem you make so many good points in it and i love how you've get the rhymes going.,although no soem parts it seems like you've forced the rhymeing abit but appart from that its awsome! |
Wow.. Your poem chilli me, not only love realize is cheap, but heart could cost a penny to love someone as a risk. Really love it.. It's flow so well! |
Its very strange how people promise things in relationships that are impossible to deliver, yet we allow them to do such things knowing the promise is impossible to complete, ourselves. |