Wow u hav no idea..I feel the exact same way right now..I loved how you go that out on paper..its really good!

The pain is really evident in this piece. Very well written and it flows well. Good job. I'm sorry you had to experience this but everyone does eventually so at least your not alone, we're all down here with you.

This is awesome-i love how it applies to my life too-i can relate to it which makes it that much better! this is great keep it up!

Absolutely fantastic.. what a heart wrenching picture you have painted!, full of sorrow and heartache!.. a very gripping read you have within this beautiful poem.. Awesome Job!