My Mask

by SpEcIaLmE   Dec 14, 2007


Smiles, laughter, jokes
Can you tell its all a lie
That this girl whose
Life seems so perfect,

Tall, skinny, blonde
The personality to die for
Always seems so strong
And such a positive thinker

Intelligent, social, hyper
She could be something
In her life, be successful
And have a good life

Can you tell its all a mask
The make-up the clothes
Everything is a lie
For the real her, if only you knew

Depressed, confused, lonely
She hates her life and wants it to end
Crying her self to sleep at night
Wishing she wont wake up the next morning

Her eyes look so happy but if
Only you could see the pain
For she is silently crying,
Then maybe just maybe

You can save her,
Save her from herself,
She has no hope and needs
Someone else to be there for her

She wants to tell people
But she cant bring her self to say it
So everyday is the same,
Everyday she puts her mask on like a routine

Please rate and comment i would really appreciate it and i return the favour

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blah Blah Blahhhh

    I really like this alot of people kan relate to this..i know that i kan... Great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This is a really good poem. Whoever said this poem was "cliched" was only half-right. I think it was a little cliche but some of it was just written from you. And the way it was written was really good. I like the flow. I loved the concept, it's something everyone can relate to. Good write, keep it up :)

  • 16 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Wow huni!!! i can totallu relate..! i love it..! 5/5..! if yu need someone to lisn tho feel free to send a message X

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Loved this poem..
    I can relate to bits of it :)
    Your a heaps good writer............

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This is very good. Emotional, and yet sad. A very powerful piece. 5/5