You are an amazing author! i must say you work is very..how should i say? inspiring? Thats the type of poetry that is truly considered art. That is the type of poetry...that can truly make you things. amazing 5/5

Wow ... amazing job.
It all flowed just beautifully and everything you spoke of was easy for me to relate with. I think everyone really puts on a mask because they do not want to reveal their weakness and the pain they feel. Beautifully done. *5/5*

I really liked this turn around, I think you executed it well.
The flow was off, but it didn't hinder the poem dredfully.
well done,
--Elly.

I feel the same way. i loved it its so touching

~shattered dreams~

Its quite weird..but seems its a sad piece! the titled was so interesting and it made me thoughts something unique.. but i can see the whole stanza was written well aside from the flow its a bit off but still it carries those some deeply words so i have got give it 5/5

That was sad.
the piece was sad and had lots of emotion in it.
i loved it from the start.
i loved how you used the words to start it.
it was awesome.

5/5

While i'm sure it's a very pretty, sparkly mask, I doubt it compares to what it hides. In interest or in beauty.

This was just excellent. I orginally came to return the favor of your comment, too kind. But I'm so glad I found this...I can relate, and it's a very powerful piece. Thank you for sharing this wonderful masterpiece.
~Midnight Sun

I like it.... it doesnt really rhyme like i really like poems to....but its still really touching...and it tells a story that makes sense... good job.

5/5.

this one is exactly how i feel.

:]

♥

Gosh, i sometimes hide away under my mask. but everyone should be who they trully are, this poem was awesome emma. fully of description and energy....

5/5 David

It had a very depressed tone, but I can definitely relate. Though 'everyone' can. I thought it was well-written for a free-verse. You really got your point across. I liked it =)

<3.Kayt

I love the use of adjectives in the beginning of some lines. It adds a choppy description to the circumstance that is natural.

the flow however is slightly uneven. Theres no method to keep it organized, more of a collection of obscure ideas placed together through fluid emotion. Its an incredible base for an even more incredible poem. Take a chisel to is and fix it up. It can be a lot better. (And since its already really good, why would you want to deal with almost perfect??)

{5/5}

[PygmyPuff]

This was good but there wasn't a steady flow or rhythmic action. It distracted me just a tad bit, but it was great. The emotion was there!

I really liked this poem and i related to alot of it it was powerful and emotional i really like it 5/5

Honestly written. 5/5 for realism. =)

I loved it...i think u described me, right down to the physical description. kinda creepy...jk. anywho, i wrote a poem called porcelain skin similar to this..<3

This is great!.. its nice reading a poem that doesnt rhyme once in a while.. people dont realize that poems that dont rhyme are just as beautiful as poems that do rhyme. excellent job!.. excellent topic to write about.. many can relate to this.. keep it up and thanks for the comment! =)

This poem was really good.I could relate to a lot of it as I'm sure many others on here can.The flow was a bit choppy but that's not really a big deal.Your simple vocabulary was okay but next time try to expand your wording.All in all I give you a 5/5

<3Amber

Hey its TiNkErBeLl
i liked this poem, great thought in it