by SpEcIaLmE Dec 14, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Slowly getting better |
Very very good poem it was short but sweet : ) i hope it did last for you! great job 5/5<33 |
Oh ma god!! wow!! it's exactly how i'm feeling at the momentttt! X |
I think u should have made the lines a little bit longer and more expressed. using big words can be a chore, but it helps |
by Marc Ortiz
I hope I'll feel be better too :( I'm always sad... anyway good for you that you feel happy again! :) flow was good well done, keep up the good work |
by Sumit Ojha
Huh... Good poem... Nice work... ! |