by firexdancer Dec 14, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
A little gasp escapes my lips |
by Sarah
Another great poem of yours... It's so beautifully written.. 5/5 |
by Kitten
Very well written paints a beautiful picture in the mind keep up the good work 5/5 |
by HidinVictim
This is really good, keep writing, and i'll keep reading... please look at some of my stuff and tell me what you think. |
by omgitsmina
Love the imagery dear. |
by kate
Oh wow this was powerful and well writen, i really like this alot. Very emotional but it got to the point and a twist at the end becasue honestly i thought it would be another dying love story but it wasnt it was because that person was really never there. amazing. :] |