All of it was a bit off to me but the third stanza. it just went so perfectly - like, the flow - word choice, emotion. . ..perfection.
But, other than that it was only an okay poem.

4/5

Simply amazing my dear. I just fell in love with this poem. Every single line, every word, wow.. was just wonderful. This entire poem was wonderfully written and I couldn't have done a better job myself. You definitely could your point across. I could feel the love seeping out of this poem, amazing. I couldn't help but think about my own boyfriend whenever I read this. Great job sweetie. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~