Our home

by Lenny   Dec 14, 2007


Blue
Frothing sea-kisses
Glittering dreams
---tucked
Beneath a wave

Scales pave
Webbed hands
Are green
Touch to touch
Bodies unite

Marines fight
And cares are tossed
Blue fairy dust
On breeze
Glittering sand

Soft spoken hand
A brush
And pink flashing lips
Smile cast
In a wave of blue

Shimmering hue
Binds time and
Face to face

Magical place

Our home.

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  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow... this is absolutely brilliant! Whole poem is endlessly vivid and filled with effective, overwhelming inner beauty. I love it! You created amazing imagery and this piece is truly original from the beginning to the end.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -Marines fight
    And cares are tossed
    Blue fairy dust
    On breeze
    Glittering sand-
    ^^
    so beautiful.

    Ending is great and very effective.
    Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    And the flashing lips brilliantly stabbed me!

  • 16 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    Awesome,
    the images
    rock
    like water
    and music
    that rolls.

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