I really enjoyed the style of this poem. Creating a piece from rhyming couplets are really effective and interesting so great work on that. Again an emotional piece by you which held so much. Well done. Such an enjoyable read. Keep up the great work. ~Mel

This poem made my eyes water.. it was so sad and full of so much emotion. It was truly breath-taking and once again another poem with a nice flow and beautiful choice of words. I can relate to this one in soo many ways.. I couldn't stop thinking about my boyfriend Tyler whenever I read it. Great job! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Nicely done, I enjoyed the poem a lot... especially the last line. I'm definitely in love with a man who took my heart one night and then spent a year waiting for him to realize I was there... I don't love him less I love him more even after all of the pain. So I really enjoyed this poem. Keep up the great work!
5/5

Bryan
Very heart felt write. This really tugs at the heart strings. It is so hard to lose someone we love.
You've gotten the best of me, that much is true,
Even after the pain you've caused I Still Love You.

This couplet reallt stood out to me. Still having this love in your heart and to try to move forward is difficult.
Great job Bryan !
Take Care Cindy
Happy New Year

Wow, that was awesome poem!! I enjoyed it=)!! Thanks for sharing, keep it up!! 5/5--

xSedushax

Good work...has good flow excellent job 5/5

I love this piece great work
reminds me of Bryan Adams songs
great work
keep it up!
Lisa

My fave stanza is the last one.
you're good at ending the poem just right.
I loved the storyline and emotion in this one as well.