Ohhh, wow. Unique hun. I loved how you had my interest from the very start but didn't reveal what this poem was until the very last line. That is priceless. A smoothe flow which held so much deep emotion in each line. I love dark poetry and you have pulled this off nicely. I'm still really stunned at the ending, It was something I wasn't expecting what so ever. This was definitly not a typical cliche poem you grasped onto something really different here. Well done. I love this one very much. Keep writing so I can keep on writing.
5/5 ~Mel