There's a black hole inside of your soul.
The scars of your past are real.
You're trying hard to fulfill your role.
The pain that you feel is real.

I think that you should change "The pain that you feel is real." to "The pain that you feel, you can't conceal." Because "real" doesn't rhyme with "real". But it's just a suggestion. Great poem.

That makes no sense. How does a word not rhyme with the same word? Honestly. And don't tell me to change my writing. That's annoying.