by Shinobi Dec 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
A field of beautiful flowers spread on heavenly land |
by sweet escape
The last stanza does not have the same rhyming pattern as the others but the feeling is there and consistant throughout the piece. I can almost feel the emotion comming off the poem. i gave it a 5/5 and hope that is is one of many greats for you. |
by noha
It so sweeet i love it |
by Goran Rahim
Great poem, written nicely |