Red Rose

by Shinobi   Dec 14, 2007


A field of beautiful flowers spread on heavenly land
Bright smile beaming as the morning sun
Waiting patiently for a trusting hand
Patient work and suffering are finally done

Periods of misery and shame vanished
Fear and anger shattered before my eyes
The broken pieces of my heart are now replenished
Lost hope and faith can now rise

The era of ignorance and torture is over
Shining smile beams at the red rose of passion
Luck has changed by a single four leave clover
Feelings of misery changed to calming compassion

Bless the day and pray for a new opportunity
Praise the one who made my flower grow tall
My red rose of passion can now be given
To my love one, my true divine soul

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  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    The last stanza does not have the same rhyming pattern as the others but the feeling is there and consistant throughout the piece. I can almost feel the emotion comming off the poem. i gave it a 5/5 and hope that is is one of many greats for you.

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    It so sweeet i love it
    and the tittle is perfect it deserve 5/5
    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Great poem, written nicely
    a 5/5 from me as u really deserve it