Broken heart's last will

by Shinobi   Dec 14, 2007


I give up on trying
Now I see it's true
My heart inside is crying
Was never considered a friend to you

Once there was a lonely boy
Who was on the edge of decay
He was life's torture toy
Dark emotions blackened his day

Again and again it occurred
Disappointment after another
Seeking a magical cure
Perhaps looking for a lost brother

Right then she came to him
He never expected hope to shine
Life treats him more than it seem
Perhaps he was given a sign

Life changed from an edge to another
Happiness was finally in the way
With a heart so true, he always bothers
Waiting and listening for what she has to say

After so long, with cloudless skies
Betrayal fell on this boy's heart
The perfect angel was filled with lies
His feelings were worse than the start

He tried to mend the broken situation
He tried to have a friend who's true
That's when he came to conviction
It was all through

Before he left a note was written
A boy's heart last will
It seems like he's beaten
His pain as written was beyond heal

I give up on trying
Now I see it's true
A broken boy's last will is crying
Was never considered a friend to you

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  • 16 years ago

    by HidinVictim

    This is so good, very touching and emotional

    After so long, with cloudless skies
    Betrayal fell on this boy's heart
    The perfect angel was filled with lies
    His feelings were worse than the start

    I love that part, i also really like

    I give up on trying
    Now I see it's true
    A broken boy's last will is crying
    Was never considered a friend to you
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    That was beautiful. and sad too.
    but that was really amazing and i loved it.
    i think this poem really captures the emotion.
    and it suck, because evey one goes through
    this at least once in their lifetime. :[

    amazing write. great piece. 5/5.