Aw, this put a smile on my face. =] I really loved this one!

"So,
Pull harder on that chain
Pull until its strained
Because where there was a little rust
You broke down all my trust"

^this was my fav. stanza!! Great job! 5/5

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Noticed a spelling error on the line;

And outs was one I want to keep

part from that though, it was an interesting poem to read. Losing Trust in any relationship is maybe the one thing that can lead to a relationship breakdown.

It was pretty good, i thought the rhyming was forced, but i read on and i understood, and the repition was pretty good, and i loved it, and i can connect with the emotion 5/5