Rado,
I am truly sorry for what I put you through. I was just paranoid. And I knew deep inside you wouldn't do that to me, But it's like all the other times I've been poisoned. "It" did it.
Im sorry.
However, This peice was very well done, you explained a long period of time with a short (or well a shorter poem than I would've expected to be needed).
You really did a great job.
And just remember Im hear for you now.
xox
Paula

You wrote this poem very well. i enjoyed it. as for a title, i was thinking "Forever Changing Life Story"? tell me what u think. i would really apreciate it!! keep on writing!!

lostsoul13