Darkness

by InvisibleHourglass   Dec 14, 2007


Darkness,
A clean slate of black,
begging colors to fill it,
Darkness,
My mind painting over it so quickly,
filling it with pictures,
Darkness,
Empty yet so full,
even air seeming dark as we breath it,
Darkness,
Just day,
except night.

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  • 16 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Well, if only for Billy Robs comment, you know you have done good!! hehe.. On a brighter note, it is indeed true to its title, and you did it the justice it deserves. Fantastic! Well done. x

  • 16 years ago

    by Erinbob

    I really like this. Though it is simple, it explains it so well. Before I was in a state of utter darkness, and I remember how I felt within it. It was like day to me, in a manner of speaking. I rate you a 5 for this because it is such a well-written piece.