The beginning of this flowed best but then you wrote some longer lines and they threw it off a bit. Keeping the same line length generally helps the flow stay steady.
But other than that, this is excellent. You created crystal clear imagery, I could imagine this person dancing and everything about it through your words, which is a powerful thing to write. It's also a pretty original topic, I have hardly, and if not, never read about dancing on here. I enjoyed the story you told within this piece, it kept me interested the whole way through and you used your vocab very well.
Excellent piece.

I thought it was amazing, i love the imagery you put in, and the details that you included. it was very unique, 5*5
Kimberly