by Teria Dec 15, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
The Day The Earth Stood Still. |
by Spirit
This poem is really good, but the part about the little boy was really cnofusing for me. I could't figure out if he was dying or if the woman was. Other than that I really liked your details of the world ending. Overall a good poem keep it up. |
Wow this is such a good poem its going in my favorites great job! 5/5 |