Smile Like You Mean It

With the right beat I am sure it could be a hit I read a bit of emotion here

Photographs lay across the wall
And everyones eyes appear to follow
You around when you walk on out
^I think here instead of "when" you should put "as" it flows easier in my opinion.
Your eyes are whited out

All the words you say they make no sense
And after all this I'd like to present
You with all the things that you've said and done
Accept that you were wrong

So go on stage
Take a bow
I know you want to
Just be proud
Of all these things
That you have caused
And all the photos I have lost

(Chorus)
Why don't you smile like you mean it
Smile like you mean it
I wanted to believe that
You could smile like you mean it
Remember all the good times
Don't you walk out that door
Just look into my eyes
Yours aren't red anymore
Can I read you some more?

Suitcase is packed with broken things
And the lights dim as footsteps leave
These walls where its said and done
^"Its" should be "It's"
Admit that I was wrong

Eyelids heavy staying with the night
I stay lit up with the front light
Waiting in check to see if you left
Without taking your photographs

(Chorus)
Why don't you smile like you mean it
Smile like you mean it
I wanted to believe that
You could smile like you mean it
Remember all the good times
Don't you walk out that door
Just look into my eyes
Yours aren't red anymore
Can I read you some more?

So break me down
Take a bow
It's so easy
To be proud
Of all your lies
Your miseries
Piled on top
On top of me
You never smiled
Unless you weeped
A little inside
Bottled tears you keep
Of all these things
That we have caused
It looks like we're both wrong
Broken glass is on
The floor
^Hmm.. the last two lines don't actually seem necessary. Unless there's a reason they're there, I would delete them.

I couldn't comment much on this simply cause I couldn't find much wrong. It was very well written, and you did a wonderful job. :]