This poem is cool, i like the way you wrote it, it was orginal and the way worded it makes it that even more cooler
my fav 2 lines would be "I waited like a rock
You stood there like stone" it shows how much you really care about this person and would do anything for them
5/5

Wow honestly i apologize 'coz judge your poem. i thought it was just an ordinary poem that i've read a couple of times but i was wrong 'coz this poem caught me speechless. i know it was simple but its simplicity completely touched my heart for the content and the emotions reminds me of myself... great work!!

This poem rocks. you have a lot of poems on your profile. i think they would be good enough to write a book and publish it! There was a lot of feeling in this peice of work. so deep in emotion. Great Job

Awsum job
I enjoyed reading this piece
Iv'e read all your work now and i decided to leave just this comment to tell you your an excellent writter

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