Powerful and excellently written piece, I like it from the beginning to the end. Very original and creative. I love descriptive tone of this and the imagery that you created. |
This is good its very true about cheaters you are a very talented poet good job! 5/5 |
by Melpomene
This is such a powerful piece you have created. I love the 2 lines stanzas, with longs lines they were descriptive and really painted vivid imagery into my mind. |
This poem i think was a lil to short, if u made it longer this could b a rlly good poem |