So its christmas eve and its the time of miracles and i wish and hope,ur prayers are heard in the heaven above and santa clause brings ur home a lot of happiness and lot of peace into everyones heart....And as u know,for every soul on this earth,there will always remain an another soul,who will pray day afer day for their happiness....take care and keep smiling always....

Just never imagined to talk to my tears this way but i just loved the imagination and the message along with desire for a smile....and yes u r worth all the smiles this world has to offer..so be prepared for all smiles coming your way.

loved ur poem dear, welcome back

all the best and take care

Chavii
You have done an excellent job on this piece.
So much emotion packed in so few words.

Go away O tears
Go away now,
Let me dream of happiness
For which my eyes since long has starved.

I have lived in these tears for so many years so I know how you are feeling here. Hope the smiles come for you soon.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Dear Chavii,all praises for your excellent piece of work.Although you seem to be sad ,also very positive for good times to come.God bless you with times full of joy.

Thts one lovely, soft and sweet poems. Really good! Keep it up! lol cya

I like the imagery of the eyes brought to starvation this is very creative great job xox sam

It's beautiful ilove the emotion you put into ur writing you should check out my poems lol

Good write chavii. i really enjoyed it . all the best ben thompson

I love it make more!!!
Amber

Man this is a great accomplishment. That's good that you are not crying no more. I like this poem 5/5
-vino

Nice poem...realy deep emotions
excellent
luv n luk
mitali

Fantastic use of repetition, I really loved this poem. Keep up the great work~

Chavii, such a sombre piece with alot of emotion, meaning and personal feel about it.

Go away O tears
Go away now
I'm tired of entertaining you,
So do spare my eyes now.
^^
Brilliant opening filled with sadness and inspiration because you want to let go of the tears and the pain. I love the image of entertaining your tears.

Do not get encouraged by
my grief and broken heart,
With smiles and laughs only
I would welcome you open arms.
^^
I like this because though you have been through grief and broken heart(S) you want to be that happy go person you know ou can be and don't we all? Very relatable. I like the imagery of you opening your arms open to let in happiness - smiles and laughs.

Go away O tears
Go away now,
Let me dream of happiness
For which my eyes since long has starved.
^^
Beautiful ending and so optimistic that through the pain you want to feel happiness again because your eyes keep crying and have since been starved of everything but pain.

Em