My husband is in iraq and your poem truly touched me... i don't know what else to say...i give you a 5

beatutiful poem

omg that poem wuz awesome it was sad though keep writing you sure have talent

Wow..I LOVE this poem. Awesome job, you're a great writer, keep writing & Good luck!!

~Kel

ya my dad didn't die but my neighbor did and i wrote it from the eyes of theyre 7 year old daughter...thank you all for your support though

this is a great poem and my cousin is in the NAVY and I loved it keep up the good work

Wow, that was an amazing poem.
You touched on a subject that relates to most of us.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful talent of yours with us.
I love the way you can place yourself in another persons shoes and write from there.. I tend to do that sometimes. :)
I'll certaily be checking out your work form now on.
David Velazquez

Wow. Very Nice. VEEEERY NICE. You are a very talented poet and your words just blew me away. I wish the best of luck to every one with a loved on in some kind of battleright now and I HOPE that they read this poem. Keep postin!

Your poem sent chills threw my body. Thats very touching....

-thank you all again for your supports, but again- my dad has not died...my neighbor did though, and his daughter is 7...I wrote this poem as if in her mind...

x. SaM .x

that's a great poem. i dont know anyone over in iraq, but i know that it would be hard. that poem seems to have touched so many lives. it has touched me too. thank you

that's a great poem. i dont know anyone over in iraq, but i know that it would be hard. that poem seems to have touched so many lives. it has touched me too. thank you

that's a great poem. i dont know anyone over in iraq, but i know that it would be hard. that poem seems to have touched so many lives. it has touched me too. thank you

wow thats really a sad poem. i gave u a 5.

All I can say is wow...

This poem was REALLY good! It made me cry. I am only 17 and my boyfriend is about to be 18. When I graduate we are planning on getting engaged. The hard part is the fact that he is planning to either go to the air force academy next year or going straight to basic training. I am so scared of what will happen no matter what his decision is. The air force academy is across the country and the war that he would be fighting in after basic training is across the world. I am so scared of losing him.

Wow I'm a bit late! I hope ur still reading comments!! I think this is like one of my favorite poems on this whole site!! This is amzing! The next time u talk to your dad you tell him that his fighting for the U.S has meant a lot to a 13 year old in america! I thanks god every night for giving us men who are willing to stand up and fight for us...And i love how ur so ope with this poem...This one really hit the spot for! I absolutley loved it! You and your family are in my prayers...God Bless! GREAT JOB again!

OMG THAT IS SOOOOOOOO SAD AND SO CUTE AT THE SAME TIME if u kno wat i mean i mean its like hmm like an 8 yr old asking is heaven far away but thats so sad

~ROCK ON~