Its obvious how much you do love her ,shes very lucky to have such beautiful poems written for her.

You expressed emotions on a very interesting way. I'm not big fan of typical, clishe love poems but I suppose that you wrote what you really feel, and described your point in a very good way.
All in all, I'm not impressed but that's just my opinion.

I am not a poet as such and yes it is just how i feel, even though these can be read by all they are intended for one person, i welcome your comments thanks