My night sky [dark love poem]

by isabel   Dec 15, 2007


As the stars shine in their twisted sorrow
And the owls grieve a fate so hollow
Feeling a love that I cannot deny
I express my wonder with a sad lullaby

Love always was so sadist and cruel
Forever playing me like a fool
Now I have found my night sky
Someone on whom I can rely

I need to drown my pain in your arms
Forever embraced by your sweet charms
I found my peace in the darkest of skies
Let the melody play, as our love flies

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  • 15 years ago

    by Brenden

    I loved reading this poem! It was an easy read, but it had a ton of emotion in it. Great flow and well written. 5/5 Well done

  • 16 years ago

    by SilentSuicide

    You use the same style of writing, have you ever cnosidared changeing it up? just a suggestion, i find nothing wrong with your style. i just wanted to know.

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Interesting. Great title that works beautifully with this poem. This poem is just right, not too long, not too short. For the way it was written, the feelings, and the concept.. it was perfect. A very enjoyable read.

    Although it says [dark love poem] I didn't really feel it was. Because your last stanza was beautiful. And it was about pure love...

    5/5 from me :P

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow, darling.
    You did a wonderful job with this poem. I really liked how it was short but got to the point, with great emotion as well. There's not a thing that could be changed in it. xD

    Keep it up
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Oh yeah that was dark piece! all the emotions such had a great feelings and there are few lines that it can truly touches my heartt. great flow of emotion.. 5/5

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