This was outstanding, really sad, but at the same time had a happy appeal to it.. the new love, the love to save. You have a lot of talent, and I enjoy your style of writing!

Flawles flow with outstanding metaphors

Oh yeah that was dark piece! all the emotions such had a great feelings and there are few lines that it can truly touches my heartt. great flow of emotion.. 5/5

Wow, darling.
You did a wonderful job with this poem. I really liked how it was short but got to the point, with great emotion as well. There's not a thing that could be changed in it. xD

Keep it up
5/5

Interesting. Great title that works beautifully with this poem. This poem is just right, not too long, not too short. For the way it was written, the feelings, and the concept.. it was perfect. A very enjoyable read.

Although it says [dark love poem] I didn't really feel it was. Because your last stanza was beautiful. And it was about pure love...

5/5 from me :P

You use the same style of writing, have you ever cnosidared changeing it up? just a suggestion, i find nothing wrong with your style. i just wanted to know.

I loved reading this poem! It was an easy read, but it had a ton of emotion in it. Great flow and well written. 5/5 Well done