Wow. this is a really good piece. |
Once again a very good piece |
Do you feel it? |
by Alvaro
"It's nice to be symbolic, but who understands it anyways? You've grown." |
by Alvaro
Ahh god forgive my last comment, it was a mistake |
by Dutch
5/5 |
by Robert
There was a lot of description almost too much that it sufficated the message but it worked well together. I enjoyed the vivid images and loved the ending but I think in some ways the desciption was too over baring well just a thought Plot121 |
by Mommy And Me
I forgot why i loved reading your work so much way back when. This piece once again was amazing, It was as if the fire was right infront of my own face; it was magical i tell yea. Your work seems to bring a calm within a storm. |
A well written piece of poetry prose if there is such a thing. Very cleverly constructed to drag the reader into the illusion of a daydream, candles do cause fires though if you are not careful.5/5 |
by Cale
Amazing work!!! It really just takes you in and you can completely feel it and relate!!! This was amazing work!! The flow seemed to work really well and was overall a fantastic piece!! Great work 5/5!!! |
by ddavidd
The ecstasy is in you not in the suicide. You just project it on whatever you want : your poetry, suicide anything. |