". . . unlikely on ehas not. . ." << one has**

Well, I must say it's not one of your best - but it's so amazingly. You have such great word usage and you can just describe stuff to the ultimate.

Other than that ONE TINY mistake, there's not a thing wrong with this, and actually it's so great - if I weren't such a grammar w-ho-re with poetry then I'd seriously not notice it and it'd be perfection.

5/5 Of course. (: