My well-being revolves around your smile

wow

a great line

nice poem

Wow... I mean seriously, wow. This poem was so deliciously beautiful and took my breath away. I thought the way you used your words were amazing. So much emotion into one poem.. I can totally relate to it. I thought of my boyfriend Tyler whenever I read it. Whoever you wrote this to is a very lucky guy =) Keep up the awesome job! <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Dont change its perfect as it is!!! Great job

Great poem. That guy must be pretty damn lucky too lol.. good work

VERY GOOD. 5/5

Nicely done :)
5/5