Another day.

by Miu   Dec 15, 2007


The wind doesn't blow as strong,
The bees fail to buzz
When you walked away,
This world lost a piece of its tiny heart, with the words left unsaid.

Colored dreams, turning black and white
Looking behind, beach still shimmers in front of my gray eyes.
Listening to your heart, the redness of it glows.
The breath of colorful skies ends with a choke.

I can let my tears cry for you.
Can't you hear them scream?
And the gray sun rises from dust,
For the passing day, the lust is crushed.

The Light white butterflies falling into blacked out skies.
My eyes closed, can't make a different of the set of lies.
The birds of the summer not able to sing a song
Just gift them a little small smile and croon along.

And I shiver in the corner of my black heart.
Air in ears is passing slowly by.
A little girl is looking down from edge of cliff into darkest depths.
Swinging carelessly, fooling both, life and death.

* To everyone who has lost someone dear.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Its sounds really sad... filled w/ emotions and very motivating.. it really touches my heart and im sure some readers too.. it has really words that was expresses very well.. and i can relate at the same time.. nice flow 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    An amazing write.
    it was deep and so full of emotion.
    i like it. :] 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is deeply touching, filled with excellently expressed emotions. Sadness is overwhelming in the whole piece, along with truly vivid and greatly created imagery. I can relate to this in a way.
    I like your descriptions, they're effective and they create very intense atmosphere.
    My favorite stanza is:

    -Colored dreams, turning black and white
    Looking behind, beach still shimmers in front of my gray eyes.
    Listening to your heart, the redness of it glows.
    The breath of colorful skies ends with a choke.-

    Keep up!
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Yea i really liked this one. The emotion, the imagery, the vocabulary. Everything about it was great. Perfect 5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe KiSsEs

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    OH WHAT A SAD PIECE

    i mostly liked the last line

    fooling both life and death

    keep it up

    good luck

    Her Guardian

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