This is really sad. wow this was intense, i love this one alot, it was powerful and emotional.
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keep up the good work.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

I can relate to this poem as many more people on this site probably can.This poem was very original though and I really enjoyed reading it.The flow was pretty good and so was your rhyming.Good job.5/5

<3Amber

I feel this poem. Every line brings more and more intensity and feeling. You express so much here. This deserves a 5.

Wow, very powerful piece. It has a great imagery and the flow fit just right. Again, the strutcture is a bit off, but it's still a good piece. Good job!

.:CiNdY:.

A very emotional piece and you really put your heart into it. the flow was flawless. And your descriptions were deep. The iamgery was intense. And. just. .amaing. 5/5.