A very captivating read.
The emotions were all portrayed clearly, and I believe this is a very relatable peice.
However for you sake, I hope this poem isn't written about you.

Keep it up,
5/5 --Elly.

Awww this poem is soo sad....i can feel so much sadness and its a very emotional poem i love it. =) great job!! 5/5

Awe, this was so sad and so long. I loved it. Great job !

Very rarely have i commented a poem, and was astounded by the art in the poem....may i say...this is amazing. and i'm dead serious, I go through life so many times thinking about those things...I loved the line "if suicide isn't worth it? why does it seem so right" absolutely amazing...true brilliance, i love it keep writing! seriously!

Gosh this is one intense poem, i loved your description and flow, these two traits stood out, well done. excellent sadness.

5/5 David

This is really good. its really sad too. I can feel the emotion flow from it. good job. 5/5

A very sad write. but amazing. the flow was good and your choice of words were very alluring. This piece really caught my attention from start to finish. :] I can feel the emotion you let off of the poem . amazing write. 5/5

Another really good poem, but like the one before, the structure makes the poem look bad. Also, try writing the whole word, like youi wrote "No's" should be spelled the right way: "knows." It's just a suggestion. Good job thought!

.:CiNdY:.

Heeey the meaning is so sharp and heart-felt and the words you use are perfect. very emotionally
but i think you can now work on it a bit to make it more rhymed but save the meaning
it'll be excellent if you do. :)

And by the way nice idea to end a sentence in the midddle of a line.

Oh forgot to say i rated in 4/5 coz now it's good but i feel you can improve it. just my opinion)