Dang! That was an amazing write filled with so much emotion. The words flowed beautifully and fit so well together. Great Job
~*Whit*~

Wow.. this is amazing.. It says exactly what I cant say, but think.. really good.. you write beautifully

Wow all your poems are so amzing they leave meh speechless lolz i love it ! <3

I think it was really cool how you made a good poem with such short stanzas. I think the bad thing about those short lines though, is you really have to watch your flow. You seem to have three matching lines in a stanza and then have one that's out of place.
However, I really liked the end of the poem, and the idea of a "Razor's Kiss" was an excellent metaphor. I also liked your imagery, such as in the line, "Mascara runs, Black rivers flow"
Overall nice poem. =]
~Ash

Very well written. Good job painting a picture. You remind of me because we both got the ability to paint pictures through our poetry. There are not many poets on here who are worthy of me taking a glance at but your definetely one of them. I have been on here for awhile I think since 2005 or 2004. Go and take a look at my favorites and you will find your name up there next to the other very few.

Oh my god! that is so good.

Wow just wow amazing and so descriptive even tho there were few words
Terrfic!!!!

Wow another amazing poem

Filled with a lot of emotion, you came across very strong with so few words, i can only say AMazINg wORk!

Awesomely put. It shows a truer side of life.

Oo! dude this is absolutly awsumeee! deff a 5/5! greatttt job :)

I like it i like it i like it i like it..... this is too awsome

I LIKE it lol oh and by the way thanks for being there for me when i needed u the most ILY Caleb Hammett AKA UR BFF

My sisiter is 13 yrs old and she is a cutter. i find her constantly coming into my room telling me how cold she is... i understand your pain