I liked this piece because it had so much truth written in it. You wrote about something that effects many teen girlsin society these days. The flow I like you have a great flow within your poems it's really smoothe and makes the poem finish quick. The short lines you use are effective and strong. Full of sad emotions. Well done. ~Mel

Awww...this is sad. I think your flow and rhyme are pretty good and it makes your poetry a pleasure to read. I enjoy your work so much! :)
*ME*

Wow...this is amzing <333

This is an amazing piece it has so many feelings in it...I could feel it while i was reading it. GREAT JOB!