Wow good poem
i no exactly how you feel.
if ur feeling heart broken maybe cheak out some of my poems theres a few in there an they rhyme. thanks

but ur poems sad an well writeen.

This poem is so very true.. i love it...
the way u made the staments were very nice..
my fav stanza was

When I said that I loved you
It's something that I meant was true
Now there's nothing else to do
BUt sit and dream of you.

i can relate to that. very good!

Perfecto!