Take My Life

by Aaron   Dec 16, 2007


It was just another day,
and I was just another guy,
yet girls always have a way,
to always get me to ask "why",

I have had way to much,
I wont put up with any more,
they act like I'm just a crutch,
to get away from a simple chore,

Alot of people think I'm okay,
by the happy mask I wear,
but they dont know the price I pay,
for I know the end I fear,

I cant take all the heartbreak,
I pick up my knife,
for I wont wait for daybreak,
as I decide to take my life.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Curtis Young

    LOVE IT!! FAV PART I CAN RELATE TO:Alot of people think I'm okay,
    by the happy mask I wear,
    but they dont know the price I pay,
    for I know the end I fear,

    I cant take all the heartbreak,
    I pick up my knife.
    5*

  • 11 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    Very intriguing. Your words in this piece seem to have a way of drawing me in for a peek of your pain. I feel it. It runs deep. Great write.

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Ya it awesome... those ppl are just toopid.=) Great job. keep it up!! =)

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxAmberxXx

    Your really good.
    :)

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