Results Of Giving Your All

by Cheyanne   Dec 16, 2007


Having someone to share dreams with
was the best gift you ever gave
But that warmness of your presence
was what my heart seemed to crave

Sadly they were only but dreams
a fantasy that i poured my soul into
And now here I'm left alone
with all these memories of you

You chose to push me away
after two long trying years
You were out having fun
while i was inside shedding tears

If only you could feel the hurt
I'll never be able to forget
a love that used to be a blessing
is now but a painful regret

How could loving someone too much
result in a shattered heart
i always thought if i gave my all
we would never be apart

But i guess the jokes on me
i guess love is not in my cards
i guess I should have known better
before letting down my guard...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dennis

    I'm 3 times your age and can relate to this poem perfectly! I've known these feelings far too many times during my life...and sadly I'm sure I'll experience them yet again. The pain of a broken and mistreated heart knows no boundaries when it comes to age...but the scars it leaves does seem to make you stronger as you get older...or maybe you just grow numb and don't feel it quite as much. Great poem! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CWG

    I know that feeling too well. GREAT POEM

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    This poem honestly took my breath away when I read it. You did such an amazing job, don't let anyone else tell you otherwise. It was beautiful and was very powerful. I can relate to it in so many ways! You have a wonderful way of using your words, it all made sense and sounded amazing. Keep it up! I look forward to reading more of your beautiful creations. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

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