We Were Almost Meant To Be

Wow, I absolutly loved this poem. Very nicely written and great choice of words. The flow was flawless, and the structure was good. The rhythm and rhyme were both great.

However, I felt this poem could of been even better with some puncuation.

Other than that, I felt this was an excellent write from a excellent poet. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

This s a very deep poem. I really enjoy your writing style. The hard fact in this poem that everyone gets over heartbreak is overwhelming. Thanks much and keep it up!

Aww! I love how this is kind of an opposite love poem, very cleverly written. I was about to say that I especially love the last stanza but in all honesty I especially love all of it haha! 5/5, wish I could give it a 6. xXx

Wow, a beautiful poem. i felt both sorrow and yet understanding in that poem. i know u said i could mix emotions but ur pretty good too. i also love the way the words flow and how you rhyme without making it obvious and how the simplicity of the poem reflects the simplicity of the act. keep up the good work and thanx 4 the comment. ~X~ elenaz ~X~

Cayce!
I love this poem!
Its really good. I like how it all seems to go together and how it flows. I like the last part the best though. Really good job! :)