This is probably one of my fav. that ive ever read!! keep it up

<3 Rachel

I like this poem very much.. i can relate to this. the flow was perfect and so was the words. i cant seem to find anything wrong in this. great job

Wow.. I thought this was a very beautiful poem. I can relate to it in soo many ways. What makes it even better was it took me by surprise. At first I thought it'd be a very sad, lost love poem but this is about a lost love, but a girl moving on. Very neat and organized, well done! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

Cayce!
I love this poem!
Its really good. I like how it all seems to go together and how it flows. I like the last part the best though. Really good job! :)

Wow, a beautiful poem. i felt both sorrow and yet understanding in that poem. i know u said i could mix emotions but ur pretty good too. i also love the way the words flow and how you rhyme without making it obvious and how the simplicity of the poem reflects the simplicity of the act. keep up the good work and thanx 4 the comment. ~X~ elenaz ~X~

Aww! I love how this is kind of an opposite love poem, very cleverly written. I was about to say that I especially love the last stanza but in all honesty I especially love all of it haha! 5/5, wish I could give it a 6. xXx

This s a very deep poem. I really enjoy your writing style. The hard fact in this poem that everyone gets over heartbreak is overwhelming. Thanks much and keep it up!

Wow, I absolutly loved this poem. Very nicely written and great choice of words. The flow was flawless, and the structure was good. The rhythm and rhyme were both great.

However, I felt this poem could of been even better with some puncuation.

Other than that, I felt this was an excellent write from a excellent poet. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe