I don't like to lie and the only way to get better is to keep going. it wasn't great, but it was good! but the integrety of it was good, so just keep trying! one day soon you'll be more amazing then shakesphere probably lol

Hazel eyes again shes back that's good.I loved it but add more I wanted to read more. other than that it was a great poem. dast xosh xala ^_^.

Oh i love it! i wish i wrote it, this is awesome. everything about it has grace and beauty and every word speaks true. well it does for me.

well done and 5/5 david

Goran, Again such a beautiful piece. You use short lines to create such gripping and breath taking poetry. Each line hits my heart sending warmth into my body. Hazel eyes. That is how I know your talking about someone who means something to you because you use that term when speaking about someone throughout your other poems. Well done. Another enjoyable read by you. 5/5 ~Mel

Aw loved it, so cute, sorry i didn't comment sooner, but definitely another great one, wonderful. loved it as always.

Awwww. This is too perfect, except for the fact it should be words not word. [No, I will not explain to you why 'I love you' is three not one...]

Anyway, as I was saying. I wish I wrote this one. It fits my thoughts perfectly. Can I steal it, and put my name in your's place?

<3 with much adoration,
Kitty

I really like this poem *its added to my favorites! :D* this is wonderful! *it basically spoke to my heart and fit my love life perfectly! *even down to the Hazel eyes part* you did such a wonderful job on this! great work! keep it up!

Adorable and such a lovely poem..congrats on your book

I have run out of words that describe the way I feel when I read your poetry. It's like you say all the right words that every single woman or girl, wants to hear. You have an amazing talent; and I believe that you're going places with it. Keep up the wonderful writing! You don't know how many smiles you create with your words. : )

Letty

Goran,
it seems every poem that comes from you is egually beautiful to the last and yet in some ways more beautiful.
You always arrange the words just right to create a gorgeous effect.

Excellent.
-Elly.