by msluckyone Dec 16, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Your my lost love that never went away.Before you we're gone your everything i wanted, and everything i needed.But now that your gone I see you more then ever I miss you so much more and forever.Your scent that I once had has now disappeared.The long talks we once shared are now silenced.Sometimes I wonder what did I do wrong.I know it wasn't my fault you never took a chance of the good of my love.Now that I think about it you never really even cared, That's what hurts the most.I never understood the word love until I met you they say love is blind but i completely lost my eye sight.I loved you to death and nothing was worth living for if i I wasn't willing to die for you. I can't say it was obsession because even if you weren't with me your happiness meant everything to me.Just seeing you made my days, and talking to you made my weeks nevertheless hugging you made my months.I don't care where you are nor with who I just hope you know that I loved you ,still do.And I'll always miss you |
by oldthings
I relate, that was very emotional. i love your justification for it not being obsession, thats true, i llike that a lot. you may not forget the people you loved first but you do fall in love with others, this was sweet and emotional, good job |
by Sora
Lovely work!! very touching i loved the way you expressed yourself, even though it didnt rhyme, it felt more like a letter, but it doesnt need any of that when it comes from the heart =] job well done. |
Really touching |
by msluckyone
Ty for ur feedback it only makes me better |
by Mr. Darcy
Such a sad write. You have described your memories so well. |