Lost Love

by msluckyone   Dec 16, 2007


Your my lost love that never went away.Before you we're gone your everything i wanted, and everything i needed.But now that your gone I see you more then ever I miss you so much more and forever.Your scent that I once had has now disappeared.The long talks we once shared are now silenced.Sometimes I wonder what did I do wrong.I know it wasn't my fault you never took a chance of the good of my love.Now that I think about it you never really even cared, That's what hurts the most.I never understood the word love until I met you they say love is blind but i completely lost my eye sight.I loved you to death and nothing was worth living for if i I wasn't willing to die for you. I can't say it was obsession because even if you weren't with me your happiness meant everything to me.Just seeing you made my days, and talking to you made my weeks nevertheless hugging you made my months.I don't care where you are nor with who I just hope you know that I loved you ,still do.And I'll always miss you

r.i.p. oscar lacayo

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  • 15 years ago

    by oldthings

    I relate, that was very emotional. i love your justification for it not being obsession, thats true, i llike that a lot. you may not forget the people you loved first but you do fall in love with others, this was sweet and emotional, good job

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Lovely work!! very touching i loved the way you expressed yourself, even though it didnt rhyme, it felt more like a letter, but it doesnt need any of that when it comes from the heart =] job well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Really touching
    such lovely and sad poem
    i am sorry for you
    i wish you will find this love again soon

    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by msluckyone

    Ty for ur feedback it only makes me better

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Such a sad write. You have described your memories so well.

    Michael

    p.s if you structured this piece it would improve greatly! Just an idea?

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