Such a sad write. You have described your memories so well.

Michael

p.s if you structured this piece it would improve greatly! Just an idea?

Ty for ur feedback it only makes me better

Really touching
such lovely and sad poem
i am sorry for you
i wish you will find this love again soon

well done

Lovely work!! very touching i loved the way you expressed yourself, even though it didnt rhyme, it felt more like a letter, but it doesnt need any of that when it comes from the heart =] job well done.

I relate, that was very emotional. i love your justification for it not being obsession, thats true, i llike that a lot. you may not forget the people you loved first but you do fall in love with others, this was sweet and emotional, good job