Comments : Last Anniversary

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is such a heartfelt write. The emotions brought tears to my eyes.

    My beautiful soul-mate shed no tears, for now is my time to die.
    Fear not our last anniversary, we'll meet again in the Lord's sky.

    These lines really touched my heart. How lucky if we are blessed with this kind of love and for that long. Excellent wrting.
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Ben, Such beautiful heartwarming poem. A dream of every person to live and die with there soul mates.Well written, amazing flow of words.A real delight to read.

    Regards
    chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Gosh the description and imaginary behind this poem was amazing, a trully well deserved 5/5 from me.

    5/5 David